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Post by kentzamin on Aug 24, 2011 16:53:43 GMT -7
Yes, new site and reposted story. I re did the entire first chapter. Hope you like it.
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Post by eternaldragon on Apr 24, 2012 17:18:42 GMT -7
I thought you should know that people do not usually speak out "etc", they say "etcetera", which is what "etc" stands for. Like, think of a mountain, someone would not say "m t n." they would speak out the whole word Unless, you know, they were insane, or they knew the meaning of the abbreviation but not the actually word.
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Post by kentzamin on May 18, 2012 21:43:18 GMT -7
i've been getting out a lot of updated chapters, but with this chapter, i can finally get to my completely changed 1st arc. It might be a little slow with this arc since it actually hasn't finished in the Naruto manga. but here is hoping that it will turn out well
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Post by kentzamin on Jun 5, 2012 21:50:15 GMT -7
I updated my 1st chapter and will probably update future chapters a bit. Also, I made an account on fanfiction.net and am going to start uploading my updated chapters.
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Post by Riley on Jun 6, 2012 8:06:06 GMT -7
Yay! Maybe I'll have to look into fanfiction.net, too.
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Post by kentzamin on Dec 30, 2012 0:18:50 GMT -7
I updated chapter 2 and 3 and finally got my next chapter up and running. the new chapter is basically a Neon Z-Warriors version of some scenes that already existed in the anime. here are some links if you want to see the original versions www.youtube.com/watch?v=q2PD13y--kk (skip to 4:10 in video) www.youtube.com/watch?v=u9CGZ9HB0Z8 (skip to 6:20 in video) the 1st video has a small clip at the end involving the bad guys that I wanted to include originally, but cut out for some reason. feel free to watch that part as well. the 2nd video also has flashbacks that make the video longer than my version.
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