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Post by eternaldragon on Sept 27, 2011 17:12:55 GMT -7
Why eternaldragon's Talk Page and not Pink Legend Talk Page? Well, because I'm starting a new story today called The Dragon Thief. Go check it out!
I will upload drawings, information and other random fluff from Pink Legend here eventually. Notice: I will not draw Dragon Thief characters. I cannot draw dragons worth my bloody life.
Also, remember how I have lists for Pink Legend characters as well? I'll do that for Dragon Thief. I might also draw a map for the area of Dragon Thief, but after I'm done with the Pink Legend map redo.
Okay, so now that that's all clear, go ahead and talk about what you like about my stories, or give me suggestions or ideas or something along those lines. DISCUSS. That's what these are for.
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Post by storyteller on Sept 27, 2011 17:29:38 GMT -7
How do you steal a Dragon? Or is the thief a Dragon? Is the thief stealing dragons, or is the thief a dragon? This ambiguity in titles is like an epidemic. My title is simple. The Bringers of Death. What ambiguity is there in that? You'll probably say that the ambiguity is there for suspense, or mystery, or something. I guess that works. By the way, what exactly are "plates"? I get the feeling that they're like scales, but what is the distinction?
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Post by eternaldragon on Sept 27, 2011 18:28:34 GMT -7
The thing is, I created the first part during school today. I copied what I had written word for word. And it was in my first class. In the morning. You can't expect me to think of a good book title in the morning. Or to think of the correct word for "plates"... The word "plates" is what I use for the scales on the belly, tail spade, spikes, horns, and so on... I use it as a distinction between those scales and the softer skin scales. I'm not sure what the correct word is, I've never made stories with dragons before. I'm using it partly as practice because *Semi-Spoilers* I have Dragon Characters in Pink Legend. But I promise I will get better at dragon anatomy and vocabulary by the time I even start chapter one, which will be a while.
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Post by eternaldragon on Nov 19, 2011 21:49:04 GMT -7
I finally finished my eleventh chapter.
This is by far my longest chapter being seven pages on Word. I completely changed my planned path because I felt it just didn't work, and there was a switch on and off between the point of view of two different characters which I felt added a bit to the story.
Also, after reading Inkheart and in the middle of Inkspell I noticed how well Cornelia Funke used description and felt it made my story seem kind of plain. So I attempted to add more diversity to my descriptions to make the story appear better in your silly brains. :3
Stay tuned for Chapter 12.
By the way, like the idiot I am, I just barely rememberd I was redoing the map of Vescrole so soon I'll continue that and show you guys. Also, I'm going to make another drawing and repost the "lists" and Drawings of the other Legends.
WATCH OUT GUYS THINGS JUST GOT INTENSE
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Post by eternaldragon on Dec 28, 2011 9:24:47 GMT -7
Name: Pink Monroe Female Cougar Height: 57 in. (144.78 cm) Weight: 91.7 lbs. Earth Birthday: February 17 Legend of Ice (Frozen Spirit) Mother: Arielle Monroe Father: Duicu Torince Brother: Needdo Torince Sister: Brittany Monroe Love: Unknown Pink is a peachy-orange cougar furry. Her “hairs” (Head hair, ear hairs, whiskers, etc) are a light pink color. She has blue eyes, or, to be more specific, sapphire-blue eyes. Her tail is very fluffy, although cougars normally have skinny short-haired tails. In fact, the majority of her body is fluffy. Her ears are rather large in comparison to her brother and sister’s ears. Her arm span is fairly short, but she has very long legs. She has several dresses, but her most worn one she will soon get is blue, orange, yellow, turquoise, purple and black (from sleeve to bottom). +Confident, Relaxed, Stealthy, Strategist, Loyal =Strength, Speed, Kindness, Patience -Anti-Social, No Humor, Stubborn
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Post by eternaldragon on Dec 28, 2011 9:26:12 GMT -7
Name: Needdo Torince Male Cheetah Height: 67 in. (170.18 cm) Weight: 101.9 lbs. Earth Birthday: September 21 Legend of Fire (Burning Spirit) Mother: Arielle Monroe Father: Duicu Torince Sister: Pink Monroe Sister: Brittany Monroe Love: Unknown Needdo has red fur because Arielle, his mother, was a strange red cougar. She herself actually has Red Fox blood in her, giving her orangey-red colors. It passed down to Needdo, and the red became deeper. His eyes are bright amber, almost a sun-yellow. His fur is short, and his tail is rounded and skinny. He is much taller than his siblings. He has spots like any other cheetah, but they are very deep black and a bit larger than normal cheetah spots. +Funny, Strong, Social, Hyperactive =Speed, Kindness, Patience, Loyalty -Not Very Serious, Annoying, Lack of Attention
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Post by eternaldragon on Dec 28, 2011 9:27:10 GMT -7
Name: Brittany Monroe Female Cougar Height: 56 in. (142.24 cm) Weight: 90.5 lbs. Earth Birthday: April 3 Legend of Plant (Growing Spirit) Mother: Arielle Monroe Father: Duicu Torince Sister: Pink Monroe Brother: Needdo Torince Love: Unknown Brittany is a strange cougar. Her father was half-tiger. Although it did not show, the genetics passed into Brittany and gave her two huge orange face stripes. Her fur is a sun-yellow, almost the same tone as her brother’s eyes. She has normal green eyes and orange “hairs”. She wears a dress that is pink and Easter green. +Patient, Calm, Relaxed, Quick, Kind =Loyalty, Humor, Excitement -Extremely Shy, Not Very Strong
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Post by eternaldragon on Dec 28, 2011 9:28:50 GMT -7
Name: Biyu Larea Female Bobcat Height: 60 in. (152.4 cm) Weight: 94.6 lbs. Earth Birthday: July 15 Legend of Water (Drowning Spirit) Mother: Cecily Larea Father: Juesichi Krosfield Sister: Brianna Larea Love: Unknown Biyu is a strangely-colored bobcat; with the colors of blue-gray and a soft brown. Her eyes are big and dark blue, and her hairs are a blue-tinted brown. She is quite tall for a female anthro cat, and quite athletic. Her tail is small as a bobcat’s should be. She has one side fang that is longer than the other (her right) and sometimes it hangs out of her mouth on accident. Unlike a bobcat, she has no spots or specific body pattern. +Smart, Social, Quick, Athletic, Positive =Bravery, Strength, Way-of-Speech, Patience -Bad Leadership Skills, Low Stealth
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Post by eternaldragon on Dec 28, 2011 9:33:30 GMT -7
Name: Spyk Hailinx Male Hyena/Lynx Hybrid Height: 62 in. (157.48 cm) Weight: 113.8 lbs. Earth Birthday: October 31 Legend of Blood (Bleeding Spirit) Mother: Tierra Hailinx Father: Eithrius Hailinx Love: Unknown Spyk is a muscular hyena-lynx vampire hybrid. He has the appearance of a torn-up lynx and the attitude of a wild hyena. His left ear is torn up while his right ear has the tufts of hair sticking out of it like a normal lynx ear. He has a bundle of hair over his forehead, which covers his Blood symbol. His eyes are a deep red, and his right is is gashed by three deep scars. The lower right of his head is bare to his skull, and the right side of his throat has no skin coverings. There are stitches covering up the middle of his chest, and scars covering his arms. His tail is long and fluffy yet worn out and torn up. His left leg has no skin, and one can see his backbone through the opening in his stomach. +Strong, Nearly Immortal, Senses =Speed, Leadership, Not Greedy -Rude, Half-Crazy, Deadly, Anti-Social Attachments:
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Post by eternaldragon on Mar 28, 2012 16:11:27 GMT -7
Chapter twelve is done! And guess what, I was SOO close to 20000 words. Dang it! Oh well, that will wait for Chapter 13! Oh, and I might redo the drawings of the characters. I gave Biyu a new look and my old drawings were bad anyway. (Not Spyk though, I like the way that one looks. But I do have a second drawing of him that shows how he appears after the healing.)
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